Doesn't fit Newgrounds.
It wasn't bad for a school project and all, but sadly, it's just really boring as an NG submission. The intro with Mario just took longer than it should've been. Most of the visuals and text flashed around so much it was hard to tell what was going on. I'm sorry to say this, since it's kinda neat, but this is better off as a Powerpoint or something, not a Flash.